[ابو فهد*]

Dear Rose

First of all, I prefer you write by English language to improve your writing day after day. Then, conclusion has different purposes as following

You should remind your readers about the main points you write about

You should write comments about the topic If you focused on a problem, you can suggest a solution.

Please, refer to page 41 for more information

Regarding your conclusion, it is acceptable but it is very short.

My proposal: Smoking is a bad habit which widely spread among people, male, female even children. It harmful for both smoker her/his self and others who do not smoke. Therefore, we should advise those smokers to quit this fatal habit by their desire, otherwise action should be taken against them by family or government leaders.

Logical organizers like ( however, so, therefore, then, on the other hand, etc….)

I hope you gain the benefit from this little comment, although writing is a bad materiel for me which I dislike it.