[QUOTE=عشق الجنون;3850801]HOLIDAY AT HOSPITAL
The last week was my holiday everythings was great i went to alot of places with my friends,but something happened turbid my holiday it was on Sunday , On its impact on
I went to the King Fahad Hospital.
On Sunday I was with my friendS we went to the mucth, i played very well, someone Through play kicked my leg, after THAT i cant moved
my leg my friends
toke me to the hospital,the doctor said to me you cant move
your leg for one month also i have to stay all my holiday at the hospital, it's unlcky holiday, but something let me happy all my friends visited ME and gave me a gift,my friend SAMI gave me a laptop and MOHAMMED gave me an mopile phone. I love it this kind of gift.
So I
spend all my holiday at hospital,also i can
move my leg after one month and half
يالبي قلبك شوف انا هدا اللي عرفته غلط وانا مو مره بالانقلش بس حبيت اساعدك my leg احذفها من التعبير اوك لانو مالها داعي وبعدها نقطه وابدا my friendكابيتل اوك
toke بدلها للماضي took الصح
your leg احذفها كمان وبعد onemonth نقطه و also بعدها فاصله هيك بذكر
والاخيره spend بدلهاا للماضي spent الصح اوك بس كمان اتاكد من احد غيري وبالتوفيق يارب دعواتك يالغلا 
واذا فيه شي غلط لاتدعي علي واتاكد من غيري تكفوون اللي يشوف غلط بالتعبير يقولوه ممكن