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to a dautgher leaving home
tone:nostalgic
theme:a mother`s sadness for the departure of her growing child.
type of work: ??مو فاكرة بس اي ثينك نارتيف~_~
setting:path of the park.
القصيدة في نهايتها في سملي
وانـا حطيتها في جملة بس ياليت تصححوها لي
the mother compares the hair flapping of her daughter to handkerchief waving goodbye.

daystar
tone:depression,tiredness,exhausted,pressure,burde nsome,ritualistic.
theme:a mother`s escape from the her daily routine as a mother and a wife .
type of work: narrative
setting:an isolated chair behind the grage..

القصيدتين كلها اعتقد فيها ميتافور بس مو عارفة ازاااااي اصيغها >_<
طيب بنات لو جانا السؤال التالي how did the poet achive this tone(nostalgic,e.g)?
كيف اجاوب....