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الدكتور / عــمر با قـبــص
المحاضره الرابعه والأخيره
ذكر الدكتور في بداية المحاضره انه لن يستطيع تغطية المنهج من خلال الدورات التأهيليه واننا مطالبين ب 16 قصيده كامله وانه على اتم الأستعداد لعمل محاضره قبل الأختبارات بأسبوع متى ما أراد الطلاب ذلك ,,
ثم بدأ الدكتور بالشرح
to a daughter leaving home
by linda pastan
when i taught you
at eight to ride
a bicycle, loping along
beside you
as you wobbled away
on two round wheels,
my own mouth rounding
in surprise when you pulled
ahead down the curved
path of the park,
i kept waiting
for the thud
of your crash as i
sprinted to catch up,
while you grew
smaller, more breakable
with distance,
pumping, pumping
for your life, screaming
with laughter,
the hair flapping
behind you like a
handkerchief waving
goodbye.
هذه القصيده تتحدث عن الشاعره وابنتها
وتصور هذه القصيده المشهد وهو ان البنت بجانب الأم ثم ذهبت البنت والأم اسرعت لكي تلحق ببنتها لكي لا يلحقها أذى
, loping along == > moving along = التخطي
beside you == > stand next you
why does she stand next to her?
the mother stands next to her daughter to take care of her,,, or to watch her closely.
sprinted to catch up ==> she hurried up behind or after her daughter.
while you grew smaller == > the daughter grew smaller with distance (larger)
pumping ==> in positive image
نهاية القصيده وكأن البنت تقول لأمها
don't treat me as a child any more i have grown up.
how the poem end ?
the girl feels confidence.
or gain a confidence .
independence live
what do you make sense with ( pumping , pumping ) ?
what does the flapping of the hair or the way of the handkerchief waving symbolized? Or what message send to the mother?
she grown up
i am no longer a child.
• the poem relates to the recollection of an event that normally happens and take place during children
• this poem take a life as a challenge
• this poem has a natural instinct.==> very natural parents worry (anxious) about their children .
انتهت القصيده بنظره متفائله بأعطائهم الحريه لأختيار حياتهم . ولن يبقوا بجانبك على طول
how the poem end ?
the poem ended with the optimism to give them the freedom to choose their lives. And they will not stay beside you forever
,وبعد ذلك انتقل الدكتور لشرح قصيده
at the san francisco airport
by yvor winters
this is the terminal: The light
gives perfect vision, false and hard;
the l glitters, deep and bright/
great planes are waiting in the yard-
they are already in the night.
and you are here beside me, small.
contained and fragile, and intent
on things that i but half recall-
yet going whither you are bent.
i am the past, and that is all.
but you and i in part are one:
the frightened brain, the nervous will,
the knowledge of what must be done,
the passion to acquire the skill
to face that which you dare not shun.
the rain of matter upon sense
destroys me momently. The score:
there comes what will come. The expense
is what one thought, and something more-
one's being and intelligence.
this is the terminal, the break.
beyond this point, on lines of air,
you take the way that you must take;
and i remain in light and stare-
in light, and nothing else, awake
هذه القصيده تتحدث عن لحظة وداع
حينما الأب جاء ببنته الى قاعة مطار سانفرانسيسكوا
terminal==> refer (indicate) to the last point of contact ( صالة المطار )
بدأت القصيده بأخبارنا عن المكان
false and hard ==> describe the light and it gives the poet fault vision
how could the light be false?
that's mean not day light but the electric light
great planes are waiting in the yard ==> خلاف المعهود ,,, بالعاده المسافر هو من ينتظر الطائره وليس العكس
already in the nigh ==> at the night
night is unsafe time
i am the past, and that is all ==> وكأن الشاعر يقول انه هو الماضي وبنته المستقبل
to face that which you dare not shun ==> لن تجرؤ على ان تتهرب منه
to gain experience
هنالك رمزيه في القصيده وهو ان الأب سيذهب الى البيت وهو مكان الأمان ولكن البنت ستذهب الى مكان غير معروف وغير متوقع
• سأل الدكتور سؤال وقال ,,, هنالك احتماليه ان أسأل مثل هذه الأسأله الأنشائه حتىى اعرف مدى امكانية الطالب على التعبير والكتابه
why do you go to an airport?
• to catch the flight
• to pick up somebody
• to drop off somebody
• to meet someone
• ------- etc
ثم انتقل لشرح قصيده
barbie doll
by marge piercy
this girlchild was born as usual
and presented dolls that did pee-pee
and miniature ge stoves and irons
and wee lipsticks the color of cherry candy.
then in the magic of puberty, a classmate said:
you have a great big nose and fat legs.
she was healthy, tested intelligent,
possessed strong arms and back,
abundant sexual drive and manual dexterity.
she went to and fro apologizing.
everyone saw a fat nose on thick legs.
she was advised to play coy,
exhorted to come on hearty,
exercise, diet, smile and wheedle.
her good nature wore out
like a fan belt.
so she cut off her nose and her legs
and offered them up.
in the casket displayed on satin she lay
with the undertaker's cosmetics painted on,
a turned-up putty nose,
dressed in a pink and white nightie.
doesn't she look pretty? Everyone said.
consummation at last.
to every woman a happy ending
the poem began with the importance point's in this stanza ,,,, this girl born as usual .
they define a beauty according to standard
presented ==> given
stoves==> toy
irons ==> وكأنهم يحضورنها من الان لتكون أمرأة منذ ان ولدت (مكوى)
which types of gifts she got?
magic of puberty ==> she has grown
you have a great big nose and fat legs.== > she found fault with them ,,,, she doesn't fulfill the standard of beauty
possessed strong arms and back==> for man
to and fro ==> تروح وتجي
apologizing ==> وكأنها تشعر بالأسف لانها لم تصل الى معيار الجمال وكأنها تقول ماذا افعل لأصل الى هذا المعيار what can i do to please you or to make you happy ?
why the second stanza start by (she was healthy, tested intelligent) ?
beauty not judge by looks but by healthy and tastes manners.
in this stanza she wants to bring our attention to other good qualities we should use to judge the people by.
what did she do to be beauty?
the answer in the third stanza
وبكذا انتهت المحاضره الأخيره
وأسأل الله التوفيق لي ولكم
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