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Thank you ALL for your comments.0
Yes, the biggest mistake I had was SENTENCES. I always make a mistake with that one, confusing it with senses.0

And I also asked about the abrev. of the Islamic greeting, and it's true, I shouldn't write it like that.0

And finally Ms. Now, thank you for taking it lightly. We are here to get educated and to have fun at the same time I hope there were no hard feelings. I tryed to make it funny.0

And if I correct all the mistakes I will really be stuck at my screen 24/7.LOL
But I will try to help out as much as I can, so don't hesitate (any one of you) whenever you need help.0
WE ALL DO!!!)

P.S. Don't fuss about exclamtion marks here, they just get messed up!0

And finally I'm not a guy, I'm a gal.0
EXTERNAL too!0

wassalamu 3alaikum wara7matullah