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قديم 16-07-2008, 06:53 PM   #35

NowOrNever

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تاريخ التسجيل: Jun 2008
التخصص: لغه انجليزي
نوع الدراسة: انتساب
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Salams to you all,0
I really enjoyed correcting this...0
The mistakes are underlined and the corrections are in red.0



Hey you, listen
this form is used in spoken language , not in written language
maybe you even should've said: yo wassaaaaap
نقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة

To you all……girls and boys
sounds like a hip-hop/rap song heheheheeee

I have something to say….will you just stop complaining all the time
and work on yourself selves for plural

I was am really shocked …why are you here?0

Are you looking for an Exam sheet?0 or do you just like to stay behind your screen and complaining most of the time?0 complain all the time, AND you complain in Arabic instead of improving your English language and working as a group work
no need for the word WORK here, and this sentense is irrelevent to the subject matter.0
are you talking about writing in English or are you talking about our too many complaints?0

You can't even write some simple sentences in English
Show me what you got
slang/black American English. It is better to say: show me what you have

It's really funny the way you write in English, I think some DOCTORS were right, save your money and change your major
wow, I agree

I wonder why you write in Arabic instead of English
here you sound like a cruel teacher in a boarding school, LOL
there is nothing to make you shy
How are you going to improve your English when what? your sentense is incomplete

When we make mistakes we learn…everyone does
being the wise one :).


The funny thing is that when someone starts writing in English, you think he is trying to show off
yeah they said the same thing about me in the other forum and they asked me to translate!0


Our major is English, and but we communicate in Arabic here
Strange things it's better to say: so strange


I think this forum is for the students whom major is English
Am I wrong
here you sound poetic, nice touch


Well, I won't reply to anyone who writes me in Arabic
wow, now he's threatening us, guys


By the way…it's a good thing if you find some mistakes here
Please don't hesitate, you may correct them if you want
I will appreciate that



yeah thanks!! I really enjoyed this

,with my regards
Cappuccino
Just put this in your mind!!
Before you correct other's mistakes you should mind yours!!
If you want to learn a new language you should accept corrections even when they are wrong!! You have to be careful about your spelling mistakes next time!

Salams…..you mean Salaam no need for s
Sentense….Sentence
Irrelevent….Irrelevant

Well, you proved my point here, I appreciate your corrections even when they were wrong!
I appreciate the work that you have done!! Creating a new nick name, correcting my mistakes…I am sure you had fun looooool please don't give up there are many post s which need to be corrected loooooooool I lreaned a lot from you, I will make sure next time, hope I won't do the same mistakes again looool
There is a different between formal and informal written…
I wasn't trying to write an essay here looooooooool
How did you know I was or I am shocked…now I am shocked from the way you corrected my post, I don't know maybe you were trying to prove something in your mind which would never exist loooooool

I am EXTERNAL STUDENT, do you think 2 weeks are enough for us!!
I was looking for tutor, from now on, I will make sure there's someone like you who corrects my mistakes, hope you do correct other's mistakes too looool

Thanks my Brother I mean my sister, hope to see you posting comment next time, and don't worry I won't correct your mistakes if that would bother you..

 


التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة NowOrNever ; 16-07-2008 الساعة 09:38 PM.
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