May Allah's peace, blessings, and mercy be on all of you brothers & sisters.
My dear brother, I've read your words and you will be one of the best students in your class Insha'Allah..
Please remember to pray that all our classmates graduate and succeed in life.
While reading what you wrote, I came across a few errors and it is my duty to correct my brother in Islam:
1- the graduation>>graduating
2- we're learning (a) new
3-we should improve our language (skills) to be
4-we (have) passed
7- about (the) English
9- English language is very common (in our country)
10- but English professionals
11- are very (rare)
12- the last sentence doesn't give a sound meaning and it should be re-written
This is what I noticed wishing that you benefit from it, I'm here learning just as you are.. And Allah knows best.
Your brother in Islam