[شذى الوادي]

My name is Alice. I have 23 years old. I’m marred and I have one daughter her name is joanne.
I want to speak about myself in the past and how I became a good mother and teacher at the same time .

When I was a student at secondary school. The playing and the enjoyment were my first goals ( u can say "first" but it's not obligatory , it's just a suggestion ) in the life .I was a lazy girl even at the end of the year and I continues in the failure of the road.(if u can just paraphrase it in different way so it could me more understandable for I didn't got u well in this point )

In one day( usually they say "once " instead of this phrase or u could say "someday " but maybe your phrase is right , I don't know ,I'm just telling u the common usage ) I met an amazing person. She could change the inside of myself (u can say “my inner self “ I think it would be better ). In that time I have feeling ( u should use “felt” because after “have” we use the past participle tens ) in myself that I’m a new human ( “person” must be better ).
Thanks for my spiritual mother because of her now I have a goal in the life.( u could say “in my life” or “in life” without “the” because life is life u don’t have to put an article )
I put a plan for my future.
I studded very hard even to (be) able to enter the section (usually , we use department instead of section and we use section for Alshu3ab Al-derasea ) that I love.

Then I passed ( I think if u would say “went through” it would be better coz pass has another usage , pass=Ejtazt in Arabic ) a new life, marriage, pregnancy and childbirth. After that I worked on myself even( till) made my second goal of Equilibrium (to balance ) between my family life and my study. Price be to god I graduated from the department of English( the English department ).
Now after I worked very hard and studded by all my energies. I got my lovely job.

Finally, I made my main goal (teaching assistant in the department of English).i’m not sure of the last sentence which is between parenthesis

If u don’t understand any thing ask me please

Best wishes